This is so simple yet meaningful.Iowa is much like my home in Illinois(we have a saying here-'If you don't like the weather, wait ten minutes and it will change').In fact my daughter lives in Dubuque.I relish and feel alive in every season(esp. autumn).I'm glad I grew up in this areaThis is so descriptive of normal life in anytown, USA.But only those of us in the area can appreciate the 4 seasons.Wonderfully expressed.

GaryJ

Eh.. this poem is cute.. but it doesnt really show emotion you say you cant wait for summer and all its perks like shorts and kids playing.. but rather than doing that you can say how it makes you feel.. something maybe like you love the feeling of being hit by the hot breeze walking out of your house and the smile that comes to your face watching children play happily.. ect

Great poem good theme and good flow great job and thanks for the comment

keenan