Sentence structure and flow are very nice, and the emotion here really hits home, good job.

NOBODY IS PERFECT UNTIL YOU FALL IN LOVE WITH THEM!!!

thts truth.. these are good words. and i realy enjoyed while writning this poem may God bless you take care.

Nice one ... i liked this part

LOVE starts with a smile
GROWS with a kiss...and
then ENDS with a tear...

good job :D t.c