Comments : Catch My Breath

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    "You've been killling me
    Right from hello"

    I liked that line for some reason. I can relate to it, i can relate to the whole poem =)
    Well done
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Wow sounds like your loving someone very much. Very good write. The emotions come through so strong in this poem. Great Job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Fallen Angel

    Gd