No offense easier said then done! but also a really good poem alot of emotion may god be with you and your children 5/5

Wow this poem was really touching!

Very nice poem, Extremely well written

This is a excellent write! Great job!

Yoiu are so good! I love your poems! thank you so much for commenting on mine it means so much to me...it was very hard writing that poem. I had to keep stoping cuz I kept crying...lol sounds stupid I know but...anyway. Thank you so much!
Burning~Wings

Baby girl why so blue
Dry those tears cause he didn't cry for you.

I loved this part. I'm glad you can see that it is not your fault. It hurts now, but it will get better.

That is a great poem! 5/5

You know he will still need you
And when he does you won't be there
It will be so much easier for you not to care

This is my fav part of your poem! Very well done and written.

This a great piece of work. You can tell there is so much pain and emotion in this poem. great job, keep up the good work.