by Cathy Dec 7, 2006
category :
Friendship, family /
other
If you don't know by the words that I write |
by emmalee
I really feel for u your story sounds like a girl i know.... |
by Rachel RTVW
How unique. Simple but strong. Sweet and sad. Nice job! |
The great thing about poetry is it can be an self-help mechanism to get us through the darker days, and also a brilliant way of demonstrating to the world that some of our viulnerabilities can be channelled into great strengths. So while this is not that great a piece of poetry (some of the rhyming is off, or seemingly forced) it's still a compelling read because it's telling a story rather than just an "oh woe is me" rant against the world. |
I was just wandering thro the site & came across this one & i must confess...this is a lovely piece...you really have a very good talent though i am no one to judge that....but i cant stop myself too... :o) |
by Cindy
Cathy I wish you well in everything you do. You will suceed. I can tell you are strong. Great write. |