Hollywood Barbie. [Acrostic]

by HOLLYWOODxBANGBANG   Dec 7, 2006


Hollywood Barbie.

H earts beating with a silver light beaming down
O n her. Draped in pearls and a silver gown
L aced with deceit from all the things she's done in love.
L ullabies whispered in her ear under the midnight sun of
Y esterday's mistakes. Her legs are going
W eak and there's nowhere else to run. Her heart's showing
O ver her sleeve. With a dagger in her back she falls -
O wing it all to you. A Silhouette on the moon-cast walls
D ances in angst. Her teenage ways had got the best of you.

B aby, you are a heartbreaker set in your ways,
A nd I am sick of having a part in this play.
R eality is setting in and I am plastic to all I knew
B efore. My blackened red heart is draped in blue
I ce and my breath smells of liquor. So for the last time
E verything is not alright in my mind.

© Jenna Elphick
December 7, 2006

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Acrostic Poetry is where the first letter of each line spells a word, usually using the same words as in the title.
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  • 17 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Wowie. i loved the hollywood barbie thing. that was really cool. lol 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by *Charisma*

    A great poem. I read it in the contest you posted. Mine was Charisma...obviously. lol This was well done, and I liked the two sided use of the word "laced" in your poem. That was really cool. You've got some talent!
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  • 17 years ago

    by Virna Estella

    You're such an awesome, flexible writer jenna.. well-done!

    -virna

  • 17 years ago

    by Bryan

    I like acrostic poems and you did very good, i like how you made it rhyme, 5/5!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by aDORKable x3

    Jenna, what a poem! I love it! You are such a talented poet! Keep it up hun!!

    Ciao xx

    oh btw easy *5/5*