Great poem, it kept my interest all the way. Very true content, those things still happen. You had a steady flow as well. Keep it up

Love it keep writting

Great poem, Seems you have grown up a bit , I was the same way,funny how when we age we look at things in a different perspective. WISDOM LAD5/5

Excellent poem here it was excellent 2 read, i give it a 5/5

Hun it was excellent. Loved every word. It shows how people change and mature as they grow older. Keep writing =]

Pip xXx

Mmm, i did like it, actually i loved it, i thought it was true, to the point, and really catchy. well done
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Llol vanity is a sin! n what is right is not always popular! i liked ur poem it was like ful of regret lol! n i found it funni! haha soz i am in a loopy mood today

This was a great poem, it really hit home b/c i'm one of those girls that you would make fun of, top of her class, all honors, not blonde but i am pretty skinny and muscular at the same time... lets just say, i'm not as shallow as the other girls, but i do have a lot going for me... great write, it was so true! 5/5

Wow.. you're message is very strong and clear in this and leaves a huge impact. You have definitely captured the world as it is today. I really liked the last stanza.. it seemed to sum up the poem nicely. Great job on this! 5/5

I have a connfession to make...
im one of thise cheerleaders that chase you and i give mediocore guys the boot. waaa. that was inspiring. i should give all ppl a chance. i nvr rlly thought of it that way. great job.

Different, that's what this poem is. It's true, this really does happen in school and I have to live with this everyday right now and I hate it. =[ You did a great job on this one, keep it up! 5/5

Stephanie

How did you git away with cussing :]

I love this! im a high schooler too.. this happens a lot.. and like u said in the real world too. I think the only thing that you can do better is structure.

Capitalize each letter in next line example:

I heard it's whats on the inside that counts
But I never really had a care
I wanted beauty in large amounts
A cute ass and long blonde hair

oh and by the way... ^thats my favorite stanza! lol that last line is totally me! lol kk... great rhyming and flow you got the beat down perfectly...

Excellent

5/5

Wow! amazing poem! WOW!!! Your rhyming is really good. Great Use of vocab!
I hope u weren't really like this, but if so, im glad you've changed!

~Steph

I liked this, the way you wrote about what happens in high school and how you can regret things.
I liked the imagery you used in this one muchly.

Our highschool worked a lot different than most highschool. We were the best school in athletics, but everyone got along well. We had nerds on the football team and basketball team. They were well respected and no one really made fun of anyone. Everything was mixed so well, and it was only the outsiders that caused the trouble.

It really only takes one person to stand up and change, before others follow, but the thing is. Most people are afraid to be different. But the truth is, I'd rather be different than the same as most people.

Good poem man, makes me think back.. You're not quite the jerk you make yourself out to be. At least you've realized your mistakes.

Great poem

I like this, it reminds me of freestyle. 5/5!!! keep it up!!!

Another very good write. i can relate to this one. sounds like me in my football days. but how true when you get older you realize society is still full of clicks.

Oh this is so true . I`ve never read a poem about this topic, with the whole varsity and all . I loved how you put it all together . I`m impressed . Yur an ah`mazing writer[:
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This is definately one of my favorite poems on this website. It is so true and the way you wrote about it gave me such a clue as to what some guys think of it. Thank you for writing this poem. You are an amazing poet, keep up the awesome work. 5/5