A very truthful write. When you get in with the "looks" crowd it's hard to be anything else, because certainly you want to keep your reputation.
It was well written, but maybe again in the end the flow went.
On the second to last line I think you meant "world" And it should be "criticism."
Thanks for sharing.

HEY!!! Miss me??? lol. Naw, anyway..I really enjoyed reading this poem...it had an awesome flow and so much was put into it! Just love it! You are really very good my friend, very good. Well, hm, I guess I'll go now....................................yeah.....I'm gonna go.....lol *bored*
buh-bye!
Burning~Wings

Hahah wow man, that's how I was! That's so weird dude, you captured what I was going through when I left school. Awesome work!

I wish those time could be rewinded, im sure everyone would have change something about him/her self.

Wow this is really good. this is a very true people. it was written very well and the rhyming was good. keep it up! 5/5

~Kristina

Wow.. i really love this poem... i like how its about something people know.. great joB! :)

Seems like you've come to realize to look past the BS. This is a good poem, very real look at the stuff of growing up and how superficial some can be. 5/5

That is so true. real life, joy...

Wow. wow wow wow. i really like this poem. and its really true cause a lot of highschool people care about a pretty face. and sometimes theres more to it. and TV is one of the biggest promoters of seft critisizm and hate. well done man. i LOVE this poem.

Excellent write.. so very true I think you expressed your thoughts quite clearly and well the rhyming was nice but i can only do 1 comment right now i'll do the other 3 later thanks again =)

Wow, its a good poem, i'm glad you realized what youve done! nice poem!

Narc xxx

Don't you wish you would've realized this earlier? lol I'm sure alot of people do. If this is about you.. shame on you for conforming (tsk tsk).. but atleast you changed to the dark side. congrats.

HAHAHA. That one made me laugh. I cannot really say anything bad about this poem.. but I can say something bad to you? yeah. You should have realized it sooner, and not worried so much what your friends thought. But.. I guess it's good enough you realized it now. Cheers. 5.0/5 =0. Probably the only five you will get out of me.

By the way.. Mind if I add you to my favorites?

I really can appreciate the blunt honesty that appealed to my sense of humor, yet I detect a serious sorrow and theme also

This is a very good poem but I wish ppl would realize when they were younger...but it's very good. Keep writing!!

.Xx.Skye.xX.

Hmm...it was odd, yes, but I liked it. It really gave an outlook on life and how people think about love and throwing it away.

Let me tell you now that it won't matter in 5 years who you date now, or who you marry. If you love them, you love them. I know peer pressure is hard, but you feel tonnes better when you stand up to people. Just don't go to far. =P

Okies, back to the poem. Yes, as I said before, this is a great outlook on life. It really tells the reader(s) what media has actually done to our lives and how our own friends can pressure us into doing things we wouldn't normally do. You did an excellent job on expressing what you thought, but also telling a story at the same time.

The flow was there in some places, but not in others. It could definately be improved in this poem. And a suggestion for the title: 'In A World Of Criticism.' It puts it in the right tense =P I'm such a perfectionist, I know. Well good luck in future writing, or perhaps life as well. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

Wow...very powerful poem and it speakes the truth about this world!!! I think a lot of people are this way when they're younge...and some never change.. Amazing job with this one... ~Tyanna~ 5/5

Wow this poem might be my favorite out of all of yours.. this is amazing and sooooooo many people can relate to this.. from either side too.. i love the way you wrote this poem.. the flow=flawless as always.. you just make it seem so easy.. i really loved it.. and the fact that everyone experiences this makes it a million times better. Excellentttt job!

Very nice
i wish all guys could see it like you
unfortunetly a lot of them don't
but it's good you do
this poem was really good
I loved it
nice work

Awesome&I agree...the b.s never stops