The Silence

by xXx Allison xXx   Dec 7, 2006


Silence
A deafening reality
that even the guns
of moments before
cannot match.
A deadly nothingness
that screams to be heard.
Life has been split two ways
that of the dead and gone
and then those that
are barely alive.
Life means the most
during the silence.

Out silence is a quiet silence.
A silence meant to reflect with
A silence that's meant
to be understood.
What are we thinking
during the silence?
Are we thinking about
pain, cold, reality,
and freedom now won?
Are we thinking about
loved ones lost?
Where are our thoughts,
during the silence?

The men at the
polished table
say nothing.
A request has been made.
Ships, tanks, guns, and men.
A battle plan that
could change history.
But there is no answer.
There is no one willing
to vote either way.
The silence is anger
embarassment,
and control.
The silence saves lives.

Millions of men are gone,
lost to a brilliant silence.
The people have been
taken into a silence
better than life.
As we stand here and reflect
trying to recreate a vision
of what was once real.
Standing here in something
that only the dead
can truly understand.
Silence.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Drew Gold

    I think you expressed your point and then kind of expounded on it; unless it has personal meaning I'd cut down wat you were sayign a lil. Also, articles like the and a could be removed through out to tighten it up. Silence is repeated far too often, imo. but you've set up some good devices; i very much like the beginning stanza but think if you broke it into sections, it would maximize the effect: ie:

    Silence
    A deafening reality
    that even the guns
    of moments before
    cannot match.

    A deadly nothingness
    that screams to be heard.
    Life has been split two ways
    that of the dead and gone

    and then those that
    are barely alive.
    Life means the most
    during the silence.

    And here's a section where those articles could be trimmer.. very ice piece th0, just needs some plishing.

  • 17 years ago

    by tomboy15

    Hey allison thats an awesome poem i like it but how do you come up with theses kinds of poems and it just flows through