Aw, I can really relate to this A LOT. I'm having a lot of problems right now, and reading this made me realize, so do other people. There's someone out there that's feeling just as bad as I am, and some that are feeling worse. Sometimes we just have to be as positive as we can. Now, that is certainly easier said than done, but when you do change the way you look at things, you'd be amazed to find how much clearer the world will seem, how much better you'll feel. Besides the rambling I've just done, I thought this was a great poem, It flowed pretty nice, and had a good description. i give it a 5/5. Take care. ^-^

-Jess

Wow. that is very deep and easy to relate to. it seems to come straight from the heart. i love your work, and hope to be as good as you someday. anyway, awesome work and i cant wait to read more of your poems. keep up the wonderful job.