Whispers through the wind,Speak to me, and Il listen

by Lillye   Dec 7, 2006


Whispers through the wind
Speak to me, and I listen
Its my only company, my one true friend
Within this prison

Walking these floors
Polished to perfection
With hazy smoked doors
I see no reflection

These rooms seem empty
But their stashed with souls
Don’t be fooled
You are not alone
Listen carefully, close
And hear the endless drone
Of minds without meaning

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  • 17 years ago

    by Carrotgirl

    Walking these floors
    Polished to perfection
    With hazy smoked doors
    I see no reflection

    This poem's (although short) has massive lyrics. loved it
    Elisha (Rainbow Child)

    I would give you some advice when you write do a sort of brain storming and write down everything you can and spread thoughts from each part. Then go to a rhyming site like http://www.rhymezone.com/ and look for rhymes that support your initial aims.

    Have fun and keep them flowing

  • 17 years ago

    by Strange Angel

    Great poem, very chilling! especially loved the alliteration of the last line "minds without meaning", it created a very nice effect indeed. :D

    keep it up.

    xXx

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