Comments : Is This Real?

  • 17 years ago

    by MischieviousMya

    This is pretty good. a little more could be added or changed. but overall good! =]

  • 17 years ago

    by Colby

    Well, it was good. One thing though, maybe two, first try to make it rythm a little better. Two i guess, try to make it have more detail. Other then that, really good, good meaning behind it, good everything.

  • 17 years ago

    by Bridget

    It has good meaning to it but i think you just need 2 change it a bit so it flows with a bit more ease