Look Past

by PoeticJustice   Dec 7, 2006


In life What do we strive for?
In such a timeline coupled with strife,
Its best To ignore our troubles.
We must look past our simple life

In life. What do we strive for
In such a timeline coupled with strife?
Its best. To ignore our troubles,
We must look past our simple life.

*The different punctuations give it a different meaning.

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  • 16 years ago

    by courtney

    That is an awsome poem i love it

  • 17 years ago

    by Hawaiian Chick

    Wow, that's really good. You're an awesome poet.

  • 17 years ago

    by Liz

    OMG! That was soooo coool!!! hahaha. This was so good!! I had to read it a few times to understand the WHOLE thing. And it was just amazing!! This is one of my favorite poems by you. I loved it!! I'm bouta go read it again! lol. Keep writing!! 5/5

    -Poetess

  • 17 years ago

    by Tylor Dent

    Yeh it does great little poem keep it up man.

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