Your writing is very good, but your putting to many feelings into to many words and all in the same poem. Try sorting your work into different poems, and don't let things run together! But otherwise, great work! No offense of what I said, because I've been writing for almost 4 years and once you write for a long time you notice things like this instantly!
5/5
xoxo

This is soo good! And thanks for the sweet comment! I know, it's like, people always act like we're so young and we don't know anything but we do. I love how we're both young. Great job!
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Love ya lotsss

Ok like seriously every guy needs to read this i mean this should be there bible to live by
every girl will love this! 5/5 <33