My friends

Good poem. I really like the part:
"In the hour of my bitrh
my mother and father were there
And right after god curse this earth
soon after they left ....leaving behind a single child
his thoughts in a bundle and his mind going wild ".
peace

Nice poem tony, it had a lot of passion in it, it was well writen....maybe the flow could be a hbit less rocky, but i think it worked with the poem!!---tara

I remember when u wrote this....i read i member...i liked it.....keep writting tony.....i'll see u in coouple days.....love u bro...and know uor friendship won't end.....brothers all the way till the end...

I know how you feel, for in the same way was i abandoned. i was left on the streets with nowhere to call home, and then i was adopted. yeah and sometimes even that family can be pretty damn annoying, but they're all i'm willing to call my own.
keep up the awesome work, tony!!
luv yaz!!
~maggie
xoxoxoxo