Well, I can tell you it doesn't feel good at all. All these questions that you ask. Everyond goes through them, but that's life. If it were easy, it would be boring.

Wow. It sounds like you have written this especially for me. It really reminds me of myself, and your vocabulary was very mature. The only thing I would change is "u" to you. Sometimes improper language makes people not want to read the poem. Other than that great! 5/5

This is a very good poem, loved the flow, i give this poem a 5/5!! keep it up!!!

I liked this poem. I can understand it to well. Loved it. Another 5/5

This was quite good, the flow was kind of on the edgy side but all in all this was wonderful. I felt the emotion, that's the meaning for poems and you got the bull by the horns. Great job!

Alissa

This was beautifully written...very intense and the opened had me hooked, with each stanza getting better and better.
You did a great job with this.

I can relate in this stanza.. I really felt the emotion in it.. good job! I gave it a 5 :) I enjoyed your poem! and thanks for the comment tc!

"How does it feel being so lost?
To know that someone out there,
And your guardian angel
Abandon you the time you needed most"

Again with the cliche. I understand poems are to write your feelings, but never fret; you can do this in a non-cliche way. Try finding different ways to express cliche "crimson tears" and "porcelain face" ect.

Sorry, again. I just didn't feel it.

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 4.5

I can deeply relate to this poem. I completely understand the emotions that you portrayed here, whole poem contains sadness which is very heartfelt.
My favorite stanza is:
How does it feel to be completely alone?
Knowing that your friends
Can help u but they stabbed you at your back
And to fulfilled only their own needs
^
this is sad, but s true...

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This piece was written very nicely I thought. Held a lot of emotion which almost everyone feels. I thought it was a very good write. 5/5 from me.

Okay it was really good but there were a lot of grammatical errors I seen. But you'll improve so no worries =] 4/5 Kaila

Aww so sad, It's like life can be, and I think this poem really got lot readers thinking about those kind of moments, days and friends. Nicely flowed, touching.
5/5