A lovely time

by Mimi   Dec 8, 2006


Fall silently in your arms

On a painting made from dewdrops

In this moment nothing's wrong

for a moment, i belong.

Floating on a mosaic of clouds

I'm splattered with colors

In the rainbow of your voice

Submissive, i have no choice.

Showering in moonbeams at night

I compose a lively tale

To cherish a magical time

Preserved forever by a rhyme.

The other girl\'s awesome imagery inspired me to write this. So thank you

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  • 16 years ago

    by FaithHopeNLove

    Aww..what a sweet poem. Beautiful, simple, and pure. A nice ending too. Great job!

  • 16 years ago

    by Megan

    That was really good.i liked it...so far i havent seen anything that needs improving all i can say is keep up the good work!

  • 17 years ago

    by Shawn

    Wonderful peace a literature...Love the style you write your poems...Keep up with it

  • 17 years ago

    by Shawn

    Wonderful peace a literature...Love the style you write your poems...Keep up with it

  • 17 years ago

    by Shawn

    Wonderful peace a literature...Love the style you write your poems...Keep up with it

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