I loved it i can relate soooo much i have a poem a lot like this... i liked it alot

I really like this it's very well written and it's really sweet. keep writing!!

Really sweet, wonderfully written poem! u're lucky to have a brother who cares about you this much! keep up the good work, cause u really got talent!

Have you ever thought of not rhyming all of
the lines of the poem, not trying to br rude,
you do have talent but i think this is the kind of poem that would flow better if there was not always a rhyme. i luv it and im glad you have learned how to express yourself thruogh poetry. keep it up
luv
cuzimaposer