by Morphine Dec 8, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
You said you would love me, |
I'm sorry, I didn't really feel that the poem had rhythm. The flow was missing. The thought and what you were trying to portray came out perfectly, and I really liked the idea. I think if its rhythm was better, it would have been much better. But other than that is was a beautiful poem. |