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Heyy sup wolfey blondebeky here keep up the good work like come on u signed up be4 me and i have more then one poem on here now i think i have like 4 or 5 not sure but ya keep it up woot woo

Its an awsome start to your poems (in others words im waitting to hear more) and im glad i inspired you to start writing. Keep it up. Also don't be afriad to add more like one of the other comments said it needs more detail. Keep it up sparkles... i mean wolfey..... ^.^ lol.... i love it and i will be waiting on more to come!!!

This is my first poem its a short poem, and i diddent no what i was doing when i made this, hell i still dont no what to do:P lol, thanks for the coements ppl and if you have anythig to say that can help me plzz do!

That was surprisingly a really good short poem. I have to give kudo's for your idea on writing this... i never would have thought of a poem such as this.
Good rhyming scheme.
Great write.
Keep writing.
~Stevie

Its good but incomplete i feel you could right more on this = ) expand it just a little bit