Lost

by wolfey   Dec 8, 2006


I didn't die, so she couldn't cry,
I wanted a knife, to end this life,
I need to fight this endless night
I had the pain, that fills my brain,
I had this fit , because of this shit

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  • 17 years ago

    by Becky

    Heyy sup wolfey blondebeky here keep up the good work like come on u signed up be4 me and i have more then one poem on here now i think i have like 4 or 5 not sure but ya keep it up woot woo

  • 17 years ago

    by Brittini

    Its an awsome start to your poems (in others words im waitting to hear more) and im glad i inspired you to start writing. Keep it up. Also don't be afriad to add more like one of the other comments said it needs more detail. Keep it up sparkles... i mean wolfey..... ^.^ lol.... i love it and i will be waiting on more to come!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by wolfey

    This is my first poem its a short poem, and i diddent no what i was doing when i made this, hell i still dont no what to do:P lol, thanks for the coements ppl and if you have anythig to say that can help me plzz do!

  • 17 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    That was surprisingly a really good short poem. I have to give kudo's for your idea on writing this... i never would have thought of a poem such as this.
    Good rhyming scheme.
    Great write.
    Keep writing.
    ~Stevie

  • 17 years ago

    by jason

    Its good but incomplete i feel you could right more on this = ) expand it just a little bit

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