by David Dec 8, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
As I wake every morning |
WOW!...another beautiful write from you!!...amazingly well described...powerful poem...loved it! |
Another great one by you, you really do have a nack for writing, i have fun reading what ever you write, |
by Kalee
This is another great poem. You can really tell that you have put a lot of emotion into it. 5/5 |
by Kaila
Awww i feel for you i know exactly what you were going through it sucks huh? nice write though your so great! |
by Jenni
Your descrpitions here were so common and i feel like that's what made the poem stronger. i think the mediocrity [of words] showed that you are just like everyone else, you live, love, and get hurt. |