Feelings like those take over myself too. you become nothing when they're not here. good stuff.

Aww very tragical i luv how you used the sky and her eyes if you understand me lol
yer i wrote the poem a while ago im over it now but thanx anyway :)

Very emotional and heartfelt. Good imagery. I would only tweak the last line a bit.
"Cause you is where I did,
Belong"
You could say "Cause with you, I belong"
Or something else. I just thought there were too many words in the last line that disrupts the flow of this sweet little poem. You still did a nice job!

I really liked it good work

5/5

Your descrpitions here were so common and i feel like that's what made the poem stronger. i think the mediocrity [of words] showed that you are just like everyone else, you live, love, and get hurt.

simply whimsical. 5/5

Awww i feel for you i know exactly what you were going through it sucks huh? nice write though your so great!

This is another great poem. You can really tell that you have put a lot of emotion into it. 5/5

Kalee

Another great one by you, you really do have a nack for writing, i have fun reading what ever you write,

WOW!...another beautiful write from you!!...amazingly well described...powerful poem...loved it!
Kp up the good work!
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