Ohhh. this was an excellent poem!!! deep and heartfelt, and I can say something I could relate to. I loved the last stanza. I loved the whole thing, actually. ;P keep writing!!! 5/5

Take care,
-Poetess

Hey darl a deep poem poem lot of powerful lines very touching keep it up xx

"Different night but same dreams
First i choke but then i scream"

The second i read the opening i knew you were going to have another brilliant poem for me to read. I just knew it!
And you never fail me!
I can relate to this poem in a way which made it better (if thats possible)
Excellent rhyming. Keep on writin'
5/5
*Gem*

Wow! those are some weird dreams, but great rhyme and flow!
Charisma*

Fathomed the depth of ocean, bathed in sea spray, and fell inward into darkening waves... beautiful verses, you ink, your penned...you painted them within beautiful emotions written.... while long the remembering, and longer still the burial of thoughts. well done dear friend, keep them coming, i will comes again soon to visit your stuff, although i'm posting on my site.... have a great day! my best wishes to you, take care... bert ~

Well done that was really good:) keep up the good work:P xoxo

Awesome write. excellent 5/5

I luv this poem! it flows so good and i like how u had repeating lines.

'Tears of children used as light'

that line stuck out to me, i luv it! great job!

Very well written. It reads fluidly and sends chills down the spine by itself, let alone with the familiarity of it all...

Wow, This poem shows a reflection of your emotions and youve used the words really well its decriptive and GREAT!! i love this alot caus ei can relate to it...kinda.. Hope to see more!!
xox roxy xox

p.s please read my poem called pieces of my heart or above is heaven

Wow! all the stanzas are great! 5/5

Wat a thrilling experience i had while reading this poem! lovely!

Really interesting. Sounds like you have a lot of horrific nightmares..

Loved the poem

Wonderfully penned, extraordinary write. I must say that I especially liked these two lines:

"Different night but same dreams
First i choke but then i scream"

Not sure exactly why, they just caught my attention. Hope to read more wonderful pieces from you soon.

Best wishes, and blessed be.
*5/5

This was amazing i never actually looked at it in that sort of point of view before, but i know how you feel.

It is great deep poem i love your expressions with your poem

Excellent job on this write. You make the words bring on so much life! Great poem! 5/5

Such a interesting poem. Great flow and wonderfully written!

Love it. every line rhymes but it manages not to overload with rhyme ;) well dun! xx