Crimson Kiss

by Gem   Dec 8, 2006


I'll take the blade
Carve out your name
A deep crimson red
Leaves a horrific stain

Life's just not worth it
Now that your gone
I really tried my best
But I still can't move on

Memories of you
Just won't fade away
They're haunting me now
Day after day

The blade can easily
Help me to forget
A peaceful release
From this lifetime debt

So now I leave you
One last crimson kiss
But before I go
I promise you this

I told you "I love you"
In life and in death
And it's true cos I loved you
Untill my last breath... ©

*Gem*

(Another old poem, it's fictional)

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  • 16 years ago

    by Nic39uy

    Once was a cutter by long stopped doing so. the reason was in this poem...carved her name on my arm and now i've lost everything we shared...i encourage people to stop cutting oneself, because you will lose those that are dear to you because of this...
    i'm reflecting what i did and trying so hard to retrieve the love that i lost that day. such a fool i am.

    but other than that excellent poem here. truly made me think with this one. 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Yunuen

    I loved it, i wish i could rite like that.. im not very good... =[

  • 17 years ago

    by x.Athame.x

    Wow, a very powerful poem. You have so much talent when it comes to poetry. Another great piece by you. Thank you for your comments, much appreciated. :) Best wishes and blessed be.

  • 17 years ago

    by tsim

    Wow, Very awsome. I like it a lot.

    - Keep up the good work.

  • 17 years ago

    by john graver

    Wow freakin awesome. i really enjoyed this one.

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