WOW! I HATE cutting poems, but this was well-written, I just can't stand them because I hate to see self-mutilation fictional or not....It's like, "You really shouldn't do that." You know? But wow! you did an incredible, amazing job with this!
Charisma*

Amazing job. You got across the feelings and resoning very well. Poweful poem (so glad its fictional though) :) take care!

Kelly
xx

Wow gem this is great! thanks for commenting my poem a wile ago. i love your poems. i'm putting you on my favorites list :)

Wow gem this is great! thanks for commenting my poem a wile ago. i love your poems. i'm putting you on my favorites list :)

For some people its fictional but for others its a reality, this one touched me deeply, it is a haunting reminder that for someple love is everything, its a fantastic poem :))

Yeah thats oldschool from gemma... i loved it
PEace
Anthony

Very beautiful and extremely powerful. You are an amazing poet. Keep it up!
~Midnight Sun

Glad to know that this was all fictional, good rhyme indeed though to be very honest with u.....i dont like blades very much.. ;o)

all the best and take care

Amazing strong words...i love crimson the word is so inviting yet deafening at teh same time i have a poem called Crmison tears check it out..again amazing work..ur in my favs.

You are sooo good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OMFG!!!

Wow freakin awesome. i really enjoyed this one.

Wow, Very awsome. I like it a lot.

- Keep up the good work.

Wow, a very powerful poem. You have so much talent when it comes to poetry. Another great piece by you. Thank you for your comments, much appreciated. :) Best wishes and blessed be.

I loved it, i wish i could rite like that.. im not very good... =[

Once was a cutter by long stopped doing so. the reason was in this poem...carved her name on my arm and now i've lost everything we shared...i encourage people to stop cutting oneself, because you will lose those that are dear to you because of this...
i'm reflecting what i did and trying so hard to retrieve the love that i lost that day. such a fool i am.

but other than that excellent poem here. truly made me think with this one. 5/5