The Greatest Adventure of All

by Kalgalath   Dec 8, 2006


A great battle has taken place
The battle of the age
Many were slain
Their bodies piled high
Bodies so mangled, no one can discern who is whom
There is a warrior with mortal wounds, lying in blood
Whether it be his blood, or the enemy's: no one knows
Crouching next to him is his wife, weeping
He looks at her, then into the sky
And says "And now, for the greatest adventure of all..."
He then closes his eyes, and meets with the kiss of death

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  • 17 years ago

    by Bryce

    I love the last 3 lines... you should of just taken those....

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I really enjoyed this, I thought the imagery you used was amazing, even though at times it creeped me out.
    I think you did a wonderful job on this.

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    A great poem with a deep message. keep it up

  • 17 years ago

    by Allison

    The way that you told what happened after the battle was beautiful. There was a wonderful flow to it. Keep up the good work. *5/5*

    Alyson

  • 17 years ago

    by ashley

    Wow awesome job loved it 5/5

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