Lynzie Kae... That was good, I fell so bad for you... if you ever need me call me... I LOVE YOU!

Hey darl i think some people can relate to this poem. very well written keep it up. xx

Loved the opening middle and concluding stanza you used. You kinda broke your rhyme scheme here
Why would you take everything you gave away
Why did you keep promising me another day?
How could you just break something so strong
When from my view nothing went wrong

but overall a great poem!
Charisma*

It's a sad but nicely written poem. I relly enjoyed reading it.

Wow... great job i really liked it nice job keep it up....!