In the Shadows of the Sun

by *Charisma*   Dec 8, 2006


Sunny days remind me of better times
When it actually shined down on me
Now I stand in the shadows it makes
Only to admire where I'll never be

To look upon the beautiful rays
How they caress everything they touch
I yearn to step into their golden light
To feel needed and loved as much

Then to experience the falling rain
Refreshing my soul, cleansing my mind
Freeing me from whatever my pain
Causing me to forget all I've left behind

If only to be loved as the flowers are
To be taken care of, admired, adored
To bad I'm in the shadows of the sun
Dreaming of a life, I've never explored.

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  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Wow... this is soo great and original.. and it has wonderful flow and rhyme.. defintily my new favorite!!! lol :]P i especially LOVE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! the last stanza.. this poem is just beyond perfect

  • 17 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Wow... this is soo great and original.. and it has wonderful flow and rhyme.. defintily my new favorite!!! lol :]P i especially LOVE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! the last stanza.. this poem is just beyond perfect

  • 17 years ago

    by Christina McDowell

    Nice Charisma, ur on my favs list. i love ur poems, they're amazin. i'm not even half the poet u are. keep writing gurl!!!! and keep reading mine, commentin and votin! I'll do the same 4 u!

  • 18 years ago

    by john graver

    Awesome poem. flowed very nicely. i really enjoyed it thanks for the comment.

  • 18 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Good job. I enjoy reading your work.

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