Hey, I'm sorry to see that. I'm alot stronger now than I was about a year ago... I'm not depressed and ya know I DO still love my father in all, But I've tried to help. And its him messing his life up. Anyways, I'll talk to ya later!

~Shae

Very good poem its short but it has alot of feeling in it. Good job 5/5.

This is sad, but a good poem, 5/5!!!

That was really good,
it feels a lot better when you get it out on paper doesn't it.

Yup thanx alisha hey i drove to school today ill see if i can take ya home too!

I think its great, its something like that why i wrote "stay"

Wow ash! I really liked this poem it was short but had alot of emotion and sad so much in just a short poem. Really beautifully sad. Good to hear from you again! keep in touch ok =) But well done with this poem! ~mel 5/5