by Rona Dec 8, 2006
category :
Life, society /
other
We are constantly reminded, "Life is too short" |
by Jenni
I love how you made every line related to life today. Very good choices of words, and great rhyming scheme. 5/5 |
An excellent read. It had a nice flow, good whyming but my favourite thing about it was the advice. Great advice given in that poem. Its a very imspirtation peace of writing, which i think everyone should read, and heed the advice given. Keep up great work! xx |
by ALEX
That's pretty inspirational, i must say. You must of been in a good mood when you wrote this! Er, well, maybe not. I don't know. Great poem! |
by Rachel RTVW
What an inspiring message. The amount of time destined to each of us is unknown and we should make the most of it. Nice job! |
by Reggie Jay
Lets just say i mite take some of this advice. It was a very well written poem. |