Aww.. thats heaps good, i luv it, keep it up.
xx

Awwww. i really luv this poem becoz there r stuffs that i do go through that relates to some of the things in the poem. u'r really good at poems!!! i dnt kno how to make one lol.

This is very emotionally strong! Great poem!
5/5
xoxo-am

I don't choose to feel the things I do
For if I did then I'd be more than okay.
But based on what I desire vs. what I see
I can't help but loose my way.

^This is my favorite stanza.
It really caught my eyes.
Keep up the great work this was another good poem.
God Bless 5/5

~*tay~