by Christina McDowell Dec 8, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Do you want to make me cry? |
by Michelle18
Omg! omg! i love this one!!! |
Ohhh this makes me sad...nice work doh....keep it up |
by missy
I like the poem and what you say... Your flow and rhymes are kinda scattered around sometimes cathing real well and other times fall off track. Yet the concept is great and the emmotion is evident. It seems sad and I understand, for my situation seems similar, I can rlate. Keep it up. |