I really liked this poem. it was beautiful because it was unique. I to was in a time like that and my boyfriend asked those same questions. that's why i can relate to it so well. I just really loved it PLEASE keep up the awesome work! i wanna read some more!!!

Thank you for the encouragement. i really appreciate it!
thanks again

Very nicely written. It is hard to rhyme perfectly, and often takes editing and reediting before it flows. This poem has a lot of powerful emotion that comes through. I, like you, wanted a place to get feedback on my poetry without having to share it with my friends. Hopefully, you can get that here. Good luck!