All I Want For Christmas

by BrokenREALiTy   Dec 8, 2006


Ask me what I want for Christmas,
And I'll ask of your voice.
I want to hear it anytime I wish,
But I'll give you another choice.

How about just one kiss,
Locking lips with full passion.
Either that, or give me your smile;
Make me your obsession.

Or hand over your heart;
And maybe a drop of your love.
Add on a million hugs,
And make me the one you're thinking of.

Lend me your hands for a while,
Or let me be your girlfriend for the day.
Then we can laugh together,
Seeing the world in every way.

Or maybe let me see you lying next to me,
With a little grin on your face.
Listening for my parents' footsteps,
Then disappearing without a trace.

I just want one day of your life,
Where you feel the way I do.
Whether it's fake or real,
I just want to be with you.
[c] 2O06 Mindy Huang

I wrote this in first period after taking a ton of pain killers -.- So please don't yell at me if you think it's awful...

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  • 17 years ago

    by bluecrush

    So beautiful

  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie

    No way! I could never yell at you!

    This was simply amazing.=] So sweet and enjoyable to read. The imagery was perfect. It drew me in.

    The flow was great. Overall, wonderful job. Keep it up! 5/5

    Stephanie

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Awwwh, this was really sweet!
    I loved the imagery you used, that really captured me.
    I think you did a wonderful job on this.

  • 17 years ago

    by Laurie Tran

    Now, why would i yell at you about how awful this poem is?

    it wasn't awful to begin with.