A Single Bullet...

by fearose   Dec 9, 2006


-(Word about this poem: True poem about a close friend who committed suicide. I usually don't like sad poems but this one is dear to me)-

..._...|..____________________, ,
....../ `---___________----_____|] = = = = D
...../_==o;;;;;;;;_______.:/
.....), ---.(_(__) /
....// (..) ), ----\"
...//___//
..//___//
.//___//

All it took was one, shiny bullet,
All it needed was one gun,
All it suffered was a slight delay,
All caused by lacing of a lethal drug...

All it was, a simple suicide,
All that was left, broken hearts,
All the people, teary eyes red,
All the missury because of your death...

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  • 17 years ago

    by Spoken Silence

    Very impressive how you can portray the misery of suicide and how it affects so many people in so little words....amazing

  • 18 years ago

    by ABake

    Wow this is very strong but i like it 5/5....thanx for the comment
    xoxo @m

  • 18 years ago

    by Cori

    I lik this poem it really talks out 4 people