Incredible. I have no words for this. i am a runner too, and i can see the use of the hidden and obvious metaphors. Great write, keep writing!
5/5
~Stevie

Very good poem. Keep up the good work. Please never change this poem, unless you are adding on to it because it is great the way it is:) 5/5

Excellent!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Sometimes its hard not to tell our friends what they want to hear rather than what is the truth.you sound like a strong young lady, keep it up. great work.

This poem is really powerful, the words have a very deep meaning if you read it carefully, amazing poem 5/5

Wow. hmm..what to say about this poem. it left me wondering about ppl. like all ur poems that i've read. great one.

You have so much talent, hun.
I loved this.
The flow and rhyme scheme worked very well together, and it was a pleasure to read.