Labels Set Free

by *Charisma*   Dec 9, 2006


(not what you think....read on!)

You geek with the horn rimmed glasses
And straight A's on all your tests
What are you trying to prove to us?
We know you're better than the rest.

You preppy girl with the newest cell phone,
And the gucci purse dangling from your shoulder,
Why do you carry namebrands around
Just to prove your bigger and bolder?

You jock who's always chosen first at the games
Football, basketball, whatever the sport
Why do you pass, throw, and catch,
Just because you're best on the court?

You outcast that no one ever notices,
And may be good at everything above,
Why are you hidden in the shadows
To afraid of your shell to come out of?

Tell me, have you ever thought these things,
Or brought these spiteful words to light?
Did it solve your own inward problems,
Your own battles that you too must fight?

What label have you been given by others,
So that you crave to put down someone else?
When attacked by another's cruel thoughts,
You judged everyone but yourself.

Labels only create an imaginary line
You feel you're doomed to never cross
And you wait far away from the line,
But guess what? That's such a loss.

For no one can be labeled with just one word,
There's so much to each and everyone one you see
So take off your labels and somebody else's
So we can get off of this track
That's imprisoning our abilities.

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  • 17 years ago

    by TRAGiC BEAUTY

    Lovely! And oh so true darling! You brought an idea that could've been said simply and made it into am lovely poem with a lot of details! I loved it!
    xoxo

  • 17 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    Yes, that is much better. Great job!
    And thanks for the comments and suggestions on my newest poem. I appreciate it!
    ~Midnight Sun

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    There's a few words that could be changed around to polish it off but it still works the way it is.
    So many people can relate to this poem, you managed to break so many boundries (sp?) with this piece.
    If people would look on the inside instead of the outside the world would be a better place =)
    Keep the poems coming! lol
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by Midnight Sun

    Ummm, I think the rhyme scheme was a little off. It was kinda here there and everywhere. But the message was really good. And with everyone that you described I could really picture them in my mind. So you did do a great job. And now you're at 160 poems! Congrats!!!
    ~Midnight Sun

  • 17 years ago

    by TaKe Me As I Am

    I have to say that when I began reading the poem, I was a little shocked at what you were writing. However, as I read on, I fell into your words and truly envisioned my own life and the labels that have been put on me and that I have put on others.

    Very well written, and truly makes the reader analyze their own life and the lives of those around them!