I have to say that when I began reading the poem, I was a little shocked at what you were writing. However, as I read on, I fell into your words and truly envisioned my own life and the labels that have been put on me and that I have put on others.

Very well written, and truly makes the reader analyze their own life and the lives of those around them!

Ummm, I think the rhyme scheme was a little off. It was kinda here there and everywhere. But the message was really good. And with everyone that you described I could really picture them in my mind. So you did do a great job. And now you're at 160 poems! Congrats!!!
~Midnight Sun

There's a few words that could be changed around to polish it off but it still works the way it is.
So many people can relate to this poem, you managed to break so many boundries (sp?) with this piece.
If people would look on the inside instead of the outside the world would be a better place =)
Keep the poems coming! lol
5/5
*Gem*

Yes, that is much better. Great job!
And thanks for the comments and suggestions on my newest poem. I appreciate it!
~Midnight Sun

Lovely! And oh so true darling! You brought an idea that could've been said simply and made it into am lovely poem with a lot of details! I loved it!
xoxo