Omg, This poem was so graceful even though u said you have no religious background. It was awesome i don't know how to put what i need to say in words LOL.
great job neways.
XOX xoxroxyxox

I liked this one and i normally find it hard to find something i can relate to in these kind of poems and the thing is, i can't quite my finger on what i can relate to in this, lol

"What is this place? It is heaven you say?
Tell me more my friend, tell me more I pray."

I loved that couplet thought. The whole poem had an almost magical flow to it.
Well done
5/5
*Gem*

(And yes, it was inspired by the thread ^_^ )

Great job. I loved this. It made me kind of sad though. It's like the feeling of losing something very special. Keep on writing.