Pieces of my heart!

by Roxy   Dec 9, 2006


There comes a time in life,
When you can\'t show your pain.
Not even friends can help,
Only you can solve the missing frame.
Love can heal your wounds,
but the marks on your heart leave a hole.
To pierce all your memories,
To create a carving out of your soul.
Deeper than deep your thoughts may get,
But the pain in you is something you\'ll never forget.
In your eyes i see exotic fire,
Burning your every though and desire.
Just remember god has gave you bliss,
With just one thoughtful delectable kiss.
I\'m writing this poem from my heart.
To me this is my work of art.
Mt feelings is what i share with you,
So if you feel the same way too,
Just remember there are more in the world suffering more than you...

By Emily Lucas (aka me)

    report violation
0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 17 years ago

    by Wake

    A MAZ ING

    simply..

    i cant believe how true this poem is..even though being a dark one.. it still instills hope ..
    the way you expressed it..

    Love can heal your wounds,
    but the marks on your heart leave a hole.
    To pierce all your memories,
    To create a carving out of your soul.

    .. relates beautifully.. without a doubt.. amazing piece of art.

    ~Wake~

  • 17 years ago

    by *Broken Tears*

    Wow, That was amazing. Really enjoyed reading it. 5/5 :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Gem

    I loved the ending, such a powerful message that so many people need to take heed of before they start moaning about problems.

    "I'm writing this poem from my heart.
    To me this is my work of art."

    I also loved that couplet. An excellent dark piece
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 18 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Started with a hope and then a complete journey in the valley of darkness, loved it all the way

    all the best and take care

  • 18 years ago

    by john graver

    VERY WELL SPOKEN. VERY GOOD POEM

Read All Comments (8)

More Poems By Roxy