Depression

I know how that feels. although there are a few words that are unneeded.
this is what your poem looks like

"I may look seem so happy,
But I'm crying inside
Heart is broken so many times,
Tears streaming from my swollen eyes
There are times i think to give up,
And i feel i can no longer to live anymore..."

it should be, to correct your grammar mistakes
"I may seem so happy,
But I'm crying inside
My heart has been broken so many times,
Tears streaming from my swollen eyes
There are times i think to give up,
And i feel i can no longer live anymore..."

it sounds and looks way better like that. just my thoughts. but i totally understand the concept of the poem.
5/5

I like this, it's short and simple, and it still holds a lot of emotion. I loved it!

.:CiNdY:.

I know this feeling so well. There are times in which I see my life empty and meaningless. The poem is short but gives a strong message. Nice work 5/5

This is a short but effective poem, it definately expresses your feeling well
5/5 well done
xx

I CAN RELATE TO IT. I like the form of this poem, it is short but powerful. It is also deep and emotional.