by Bridget Dec 9, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
I feel so lost, |
I can relate I enjoyed the last to lines most. excellent poem |
Beautiful. thats the best word 2 describe this. everything was perfect. you asked some good questions, and if u get the answers let me know!:P anywho, amazing work. 5/5 |
by Michelle
I feel the samee.. |
Wow! This poem touched a soft spot. Every word was perfect (except i would change NO ONE to NOBODY. Gives an extra syllable that's needed!) |
by Michelle18
I really enjoyed reading this poem...i felt like this plenty of times before...but dont give up hope... excellent job! |