This is incrideable, i really like it. Its all true, all makes sense, and great job making it flow and ryming, your a real pro.

What a very good write! This really brings your feelings right to the person that is reading it! Excellent job!

I really like this poem5/5. in a way i know how you feel. keep writing.
((Kelsey))

Thank you everyone! i like this poem the most out of all the ones I've written

You have flow. Something which most poets will never attain, no matter how hard they try.

Human speech often follows the rhythm of Iambic pentameter, which is why many poets seemingly have the gift without any effort on their part. Using this gift I would suggest that you know look up as many poetry forms as possible.

When writing, you must also remember that you are telling something to the reader. Before even beginning a poem ask yourself, what do I want to say?

Now follow with a beginning, middle, and end. The beginning containing a theme, the middle supporting that theme, and end concluding with a statement.

I really like this, the last 2 stanzas were my favorites. But it was all very well written. Good work! =)

x.xBrokenx.x

You Did a Good job girl.

Oh my gosh.
i love this! it's freakin amazing! great job!

I liked this poem. it really spoke to me. i've also felt like that before. i especially liked
"My body is living,
but my soul is long dead"
and
"What's the point in living,
when I don't feel real?"
especially the last one so daMNED TRUE FOR ME ASWELL. GOOD WORK
ROCKY

Another beautiful write. It was sad, but interesting. I like your style, how you use similes in all your poems. It really creates great imagery. Wonderful job.

I really enjoyed reading this poem...i felt like this plenty of times before...but dont give up hope... excellent job!

Wow! This poem touched a soft spot. Every word was perfect (except i would change NO ONE to NOBODY. Gives an extra syllable that's needed!)
5/5
~Stephen White
♥

I feel the samee..
but keep your head up high and you will find ur place..its like ur locked up in a box too ..right?

Beautiful. thats the best word 2 describe this. everything was perfect. you asked some good questions, and if u get the answers let me know!:P anywho, amazing work. 5/5

I can relate I enjoyed the last to lines most. excellent poem