This poem is wonderful...it put tears in my eyes...cus sometimes i think i rushed a lil too...but i dont kno yet..but ifeel i might be alone...anyways if this is a true story or poem..wat i have learned and a piece of advice...when u pray dont pray for wat kinda guy u want...instead pray and ask god to send u the man he has chossen to be ur man..god does not give us wat we want...but wat we need...

This is an amazing poem. You are truely an amazing poet.

"She grew up too fast,
then wanted back her past,
But those days are but a memory,
She should have known,
Love is only temporary."

I love that stanza. Simply beautiful.
I also love your quotes=)
Anyways, great job, and keep writing!
5/5
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This is soooo truthful and I think that its real good!!!
Its real sad too but i think dat almost every girl has gone through this. .... . i kno dat i have
but ne wayz keep up all da good peoms!!!!

Hey this is a good poem..keep it up...btw thnx for commenting my poem

That was great!...so many people can relate to that, which is an amazing part of this poem.....5/5...thanks for the comment....comment back?!