Hiyaa, I really liked this one. Sad. Pretty. And it had God in it. =P
I thoought it was great.

Thats really great!!! i luv the reference to god at the end. it gives hope and thats all we really need. keep it up!!!

Even though when my dad left i didn't care cause i didn't like i still thinks this is a good poem we both have the same things happen to us but just different reactions
keep writing!!...=)

Wow good poem nice emotion good job!!