Long gone

by schmaltziness   Dec 9, 2006


I gave up on us long ago,
But somehow you keep showing up.
You keep telling me all this bullshit,
Why can't you just shut up.

Don't beg me for attention,
Cause it is useless now.
We lost the battle of love,
Don't ask me how.

It took me a long time to get over you,
My guess is that you've moved on.
Somehow you keep coming back,
Somebody tell me what's going on.

My love for you ended long ago,
Nothing is left of us.
You made me lose a lot of things,
Including my trust.

As I sat down and thought,
About the times we had together.
I keep thinking about those times,
As though they will last forever.

I questioned myself,
Because of you.
Is the love we had,
Have it ever been true.

**I wrote this cos I was getting fed up by this guy who I want nothing to do with but he keeps coming back...Pls leave a comment...thx

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  • 17 years ago

    by juss an allycat

    Hey girlie

    i read your comment on my poem, about u wanting to write like me. let me tell you how flattering and apperciative i amof a comment like that.

    about this poem, well your msg about frustration has definately come through. i thought your flow was very bumpy and rough however that actually suits the feeling your poem is letting off. the message is strong.
    some constructive crit would be that you should try to balance out the lengths of your senetences better so that the poem seems more rounded and together.
    hope taht wasnt too harsh =]
    have a good one.

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