Well written, but I think this should be in the love catergory under the lost love sub-section. The flow was good as well as the structure. Great Job!

Peace, Joe

Nice job.
I think that in the world there are many guys like this and I agree that they are all sick pigs. =]
I agree that the poem should be under the Lost Love section in the Love catergory. It fits better there. Overall, fantastic job. Keep it up! 5/5

Stephanie

I loved this, it is one of my favourites.
I thought it flowed well, and the wording was a pleasure to read, as was the imagery.