by *Charisma* Dec 9, 2006
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
A void I had is now filled by you |
A nice, simple, soothing piece. I particularly liked the lines 'It's not what you said, but all that you do' and 'Fall into my lap, spill from my mind', the latter especially, it was wonderfully worded. |
by Boy
Lovely writing style. strong emotions and image you hae put here. excellent piece of work |
Wow, so dang powerful. Didn`t expect that ending, at all. Every line in this piece just screams the emotion, I love it. |
COMMENT # 3 |
by Jamica
Excellent write. I enjoy reading your stuff. Keep it up! |