That was very good! It's not like you to not write poems that are 4 lines each but this definately worked and I LOVED the last line. Great job!
~Midnight Sun

Very touching. Very nicely written.

Different from your normal poems but still incredibly good! You used some excellent words in this one! Very moving indeed.

"In this rush of life, I was lost in the crowd
But your hand guided me out."

It's just that couplet that threw me off a bit because it seems kind of stilted. But i can't think of anything that would sound better so i'll leave it for now ;)
Superb love poem =)
5/5
*Gem*

Absolutely stunning, an amazing work. Hope to read more of your work soon, you have such talent. Best wishes, and Blessed Be. *5/5

What a wonderful poem! I am really glad I got to read this! Excellent job!

Awww.. its so sweet and romantic, you did a good job writing this and making it rythme so beautiful! Keep it up and good luck on your writing. Also thanx for your comment on my poem .:*.

Very good.. i loved it 5/5

Very good write. I agree with Gem on the one couplet:

"In this rush of life, I was lost in the crowd
But your hand guided me out."

Maybe use something like:

With a touch from your hand, you guided me out.....

Just a suggestion...it's still a marvelous love poem, full of imagery and emotion....5/5

This poem i can relate i love it keep the poems coming!!!!

***Samantha

This is great. 5/5

This is a very cute poem..very meaningful
keep up the amazing work...
tristan

It's really good. i can really relate to it, and i'm sure everyone has fallen in love once, and known these feelings. it's really amazing, there's nothing i would change about it. keep it up!!:)

Excellent write. I enjoy reading your stuff. Keep it up!

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aww.. this is soo cute.. simple but still strong.. the emotion is great and the last line is killer.. another spectacular one

Wow, so dang powerful. Didn`t expect that ending, at all. Every line in this piece just screams the emotion, I love it.

5.5
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Lovely writing style. strong emotions and image you hae put here. excellent piece of work

A nice, simple, soothing piece. I particularly liked the lines 'It's not what you said, but all that you do' and 'Fall into my lap, spill from my mind', the latter especially, it was wonderfully worded.

Brad