No One Knows

by finally just me   Dec 9, 2006


No one knows this girl\'s sick of
living this lie we call life
no one knows if its wrong
or if it's right

No one knows
this girl is sad
no one knows
the life shes had

No one knows
theres a girl that needs help
no one knows
she\'s standing by herself

no one sees the
pain in her eyes
no one hears her
useless cries

no one knows
the dreams she hides
to bad no one will ever know
the girl inside

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  • 17 years ago

    by REL

    Hmmmmmmmm u say ur not good at writing snd u wont even believe me but u r a fantastic writer 10/5 fo' sho'

  • 17 years ago

    by Teria

    There's poems I read..
    That I can't figure out if I like them as I read..
    Ya know.
    And, then the end just.. makes me fall in love with it.
    Right?
    Yours did that.
    All but the last stanza was okay.
    It wasn't GREAT but it defintally wasn't bad.
    And, the last stanza, just was great.
    I loved it.
    Fixed the whole... middleish poem.
    Lol.
    Great Job, Hun.
    Keep up the good work.
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    Very good job on this poem! So sad! 5/5

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